This may be hard for some of you to take, but I, Revis Edgewater, am not perfect. I have made a mistake. I’ll wait a few moments so you can let that monumental news sink in.
Ok. Now that you’ve all had time to adjust to this shocking development, I will explain.
When I originally started writing A Race To Danger, the prologue was a lot longer. It had a little bit of a back story for Torr, plus a few of the other characters that appear in the story as well. I reread the prologue when I was halfway done with the Part 1 of the story and decided that it would be better to have a shorter prologue and just give the characters their backstories as I went along in the story. So, I shortened the prologue and posted it.
Last night, I finished Part 1 of the story and was going to post it, but as I was rereading it, to check for errors, I realized my mistake. I never changed any of Part 1 to reflect the shortening of the prologue. Therefore, when I was talking about certain characters, you would’ve had no idea who they were because I cut them out of the prologue. If I would have posted it, you’d all be confused as hell.
Big mistake, Indy!
Now I have to go back and rewrite all of Part 1 before I can post it. Oy vey.
(waits for the populace to kick him for his brain fart.)
33 Grams of Blog 
I say you sell it as avant-garde writing, and blame the readers for not being in tune.
Wouldn’t have had anything to do with the alcohol??
Susan …. Revis doesn’t drink.
That makes one of us.
Well, he has back problems and has medication he has to take that doesn’t mix well with alcohol…
Very wise decision on his part.
Yes.
Getting settled in?? I can’t follow Twitter two nights in a row….not nearly enough brain cells have been saturated for that!!
I’m effing beat….
I couldn’t keep up….had some wine and passed out on my couch.
Oh, I was out by 9:30. Since my wife is still recovering from surgery I had to do ALL of the moving and I had nothing left.
Oh, I hope it wasn’t major surgery and she’s doing well. You’re a good guy, Daddy.
She had a hysterectomy. And she is doing well. She’s just still on lifting restrictions.
I’m sure you’ll take good care of her!!
I’m trying!
I clicked the jeopardy theme music. That would have been a perfect place for a RickRoll, and was sooo glad it wasn’t. Thank you. Good for you for catching the “big mistake” before a reader had a chance to point it out.
Haha. Great idea! I’m gonna rickroll some bitches soon.
Bad sense of humor here sorry could not resist…my gift to you….
Someone needs to do this kind of thing except using the Night at the Roxbury song instead of Rick Astley.
lol
Revis Edgewater? Don’t tell me you have a BadAss name like that and you willing chose to use Stuph & Twindaddy. I would have Revis Edgewater t-shirts…why?…because when you have a BadAss name that’s this kinda shit you can do! I’m going to be disappointed if it’s your stage name or something…very disappointment.
Tops, I can’t help but wonder if you were drunk when you wrote this cause….WTF?